Saturday, February 9, 2008

Mon Bon Ami







My cheeks are soaked with tears dropping nigh,

The eyes are sore from an anguish cry,
Is this the beginning of a rift from thy?
Ask myself I do, as each day passes by.

For this is a hardship , that I can't face,
Too weak I am, to let it grace,
Remember I do, of those good old days,
When thy would accept my sinful ways.

Don't let this sin of mine cloud your senses,
For sinned I have, but didn't mean no offenses,
Hurt you, I may've, with my actions so frayed,
But remember my friend, we have crossed those fences.

This is my last forlorn effort towards redemption,
Tell me my friend what is your presumption.
Are we still good, ol' friend of mine?
I shall promise thy, never again shall I cross the line.


3 comments:

Bharath R S on February 10, 2008 at 12:10 AM said...

dude i guess u staying onsite is bringing out the poet in you!!

nice poem dude!!

Srivatsa Kondapalli on February 10, 2008 at 9:02 PM said...

maga, idella naataka beda!!

But that contest was good - not the stupid contest you are putting up. I am talking about the "poem" contest between you two...it brought the best out of both of them...he he he..

Great goin!!

Jagannath on April 10, 2008 at 10:43 PM said...

nice poem dude!

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