Saturday, December 29, 2007

You can't break me







You can try as hard as you may,

My will is too strong to give away,
I have fought many a demons in my life,
Humbled and defeated,in my past they lie.

Not long ago in the past,
At its peak was my chagrin in you,
For all the hardshsips thrown at me,
Thought I, that a befitting reply was due.

The harships I've faced has thickened my skin,
Grown I have accustomed to your ways,
May be there is a meaning to all that you do,
It's essence is what gives me hope of better days.

So bring it on , I shall bear no grudge,
Ready I am, to face the full brunt of your force,
Let the mind games begin,
After all, it's high time I settle some scores.

In time I shall be strong enough to stand up to you,
Look you in the eye without a twitch,
And with the utmost conviction shall I say,
"You can't break me, try as hard as you may".


A small attempt to depict the conflict of my mind. One part of me has exuberant confidence whereas the other side still is lost in an ocean of self doubt and low self confidence. This is a conversation that my stronger side is having with my weaker side. A little of coming out of a shell you see :) I hope you liked it.

5 comments:

the stygian sailor on December 29, 2007 at 9:02 PM said...

chagrin???
indeed it is a 'chagrin' when i ve to look into the dictionary for synonyms

Soumya Murthy on December 29, 2007 at 9:16 PM said...

its a bit complex... but you are geeting to that point where not many people will be able to understand what you write...

Srivatsa Kondapalli on December 31, 2007 at 12:18 AM said...

I agree with the above two...it is getting complex and complex day by day to understand your blog...mainly because of usage of high level english...
in first attempt, i didn't understand a thing...later when i read the description you have given at the end, read it once again and it was awesome...

all i can say is you are getting professional!!

Rahul Nair on December 31, 2007 at 1:06 PM said...

Good One da...
Keep on writing...
But dont limit your creativity to mind and soul and angels ...
i had to try real hard to come out of such things

Bharath R S on January 1, 2008 at 11:00 PM said...

good dude!!!!! nice one!!! U can write GRE for sure!!!

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